Yuppie Life Doesn’t Pay

posted about 1 year ago by mitchbones

This is my very first tee.

Any criticism will be greatly appreciated. The only thing I don’t like about it is the text, I just couldn’t get it right.

Updated!

Cole said about 1 year ago

the name placement on the back doesnt make any sense.
mitchbones said about 1 year ago

I wanted an interesting way to put my company name. Yeah, now that I look at it, doesn’t seem right.
quixotic said about 1 year ago

I’d say get rid of the name on the back. Maybe make it into a tag print on the inside neck of the shirt.

Also, take the white from his teeth and put it into his eyes. Or at least do something to make the eyes pop out a little more.

You’re off to a pretty good start though. Keep it up.
jimmyheartcore said about 1 year ago

quixotic said: I’d say get rid of the name.

Altogether. You want simple man, trust me.
mitchbones said about 1 year ago

Made a few changes, I think it made a huge difference.
noFunk said about 1 year ago

cool shirt, are you allowed to use that image/likeness?
this makes me want to go back and read the book again
Wizeguyztees said 21 days ago

pretty solid, I like the first two better because they are more on the humor side but that is probably just me.
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