I dont think this concept is clear in your design. Just to far of a step to realize its the mtv logo and that the m stand for music and should read TV Got Real, Music Got Fake
I saw the Mtv logo straight away, but didnt get the concept. Now i know the concept I really like the idea of what it COULD be, but as Kruse said.. Its not clear enough.
Yeah i red the back text first as its just so big. Maybe if it was less to do with layers text and more to do with the 'tv' and the 'm' coming further up than the text below instead of on top.
Even though its kind of "What the?" with the 'TV' being above the 'M'... Ive always found that if you see something like this its as if the designer knows something I dont and its like that on purpose... and I design shirts so I think about what went into the design more than your average person.
Hopefully I dont forget to check this later because Id buy it as is, I completely agree.
Awesome idea, but I couldnt understand what it said until after I clicked to read the title. Just needs to be executed and designed a little differently so that its easily understood. But yea, Awesome idea, props. Id like to see what you work up next and I would deffinately wear it.
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Jon Kruse said 4 months ago
TV Got Real, Music Got Fake
I dont think this concept is clear in your design. Just to far of a step to realize its the mtv logo and that the m stand for music and should read TV Got Real, Music Got Fake
Robmcbride said 4 months ago
I saw the Mtv logo straight away, but didnt get the concept. Now i know the concept I really like the idea of what it COULD be, but as Kruse said.. Its not clear enough.
quakerninja said 4 months ago
Big text has more focus, It reads incorrectly. Also there is a top to bottom issue.
What do you want the Look or the saying.
Democlasm said 4 months ago
Yeah i red the back text first as its just so big. Maybe if it was less to do with layers text and more to do with the 'tv' and the 'm' coming further up than the text below instead of on top.
Corey said 4 months ago
Thanks for the tips, this was pretty rushed which Im sure is apparent. Ill try to rework it, so the message is easier to convey.
Josh | Diamond Diet said 4 months ago
Even though its kind of "What the?" with the 'TV' being above the 'M'... Ive always found that if you see something like this its as if the designer knows something I dont and its like that on purpose... and I design shirts so I think about what went into the design more than your average person.
Hopefully I dont forget to check this later because Id buy it as is, I completely agree.
AYYOGOLDSTEIN said 4 months ago
I love the idea, but its confusing to figure out.
DanceBerlin said 2 months ago
Awesome idea, but I couldnt understand what it said until after I clicked to read the title. Just needs to be executed and designed a little differently so that its easily understood. But yea, Awesome idea, props. Id like to see what you work up next and I would deffinately wear it.