agreed. I like your style, but it feels like they’re laid out separately on the shirt rather than being parts of a whole. also, you may want to cut down on the number of colors if you’re looking to get this screen printed (I’m too lazy to count right now, though).
Thank you Matt and Seibei :)
...I am too lazy for interaction, I think I just quit this design and wait for some kids tees manufacturer ;)
...but thanks for your advice.
I really love this design! I wouldn’t give up on it. I think the alignment is fine. you might want to think more about the color of the shirt, though. Few people look good in yellow. It would be nice if it could be more of the green-yellow of the illustrated tee on the right, above.
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matt_1914hero said 5 months ago
It’s good i like it but in a way i would like to see more interaction with the characters might help this??
Matt
seibei said 5 months ago
agreed. I like your style, but it feels like they’re laid out separately on the shirt rather than being parts of a whole. also, you may want to cut down on the number of colors if you’re looking to get this screen printed (I’m too lazy to count right now, though).
matt_1914hero said 5 months ago
Yeah theres 7+ in there so cut them down maybe just have 1 blue, 1 green etc instead of shades
Matt
pipi-li said 5 months ago
Thank you Matt and Seibei :)
...I am too lazy for interaction, I think I just quit this design and wait for some kids tees manufacturer ;)
...but thanks for your advice.
Greenwhimsy said 5 months ago
I really love this design! I wouldn’t give up on it. I think the alignment is fine. you might want to think more about the color of the shirt, though. Few people look good in yellow. It would be nice if it could be more of the green-yellow of the illustrated tee on the right, above.
pipi-li said 5 months ago
Thanks! After this encouragement I 'll think about some further move :)