2008-09-09T19:08:27-04:00 2008-09-09T19:08:27-04:00 17 2008-06-05T10:34:12-04:00 Not crazy about the sticker part... i need critique... specifically in how the band name should go... i thad a thought of drawing a splatter on the back shoulder. 0 4885 785 Family Force 5 - Fever tee 954 4 2009-11-08T03:12:57-05:00 1522 http://cache1.emptees.com/images/19644/fever.jpg Great idea!! luv the lettering. yeah not sure about the sticker. what about bigger and behind thermometer or a patteren maybe? there's alot of room there to play with. 4885 Tee 2008-06-05T10:40:17-04:00 98960 3168 2008-06-05T10:40:17-04:00 Great concept! yeah, the sticker could maybe be replaced by some larger, more subtle (Like in the light blue you used on the sticker) type in the background to fill up the sides of the thermometer? I dunno. 4885 Tee 2008-06-05T10:51:41-04:00 98972 3001 2008-06-05T10:52:05-04:00 Bad Idea Alert: I say you have a fucking sun or something generating heat (Toaster, microwave,Sun, Fireball, Megan Fox) with FF5 written on it. 4885 Tee 2008-06-05T11:16:58-04:00 98990 665 2008-06-05T11:16:58-04:00 I'm not digging the concept at all. Sorry man. 4885 Tee 2008-06-05T11:38:07-04:00 99014 1661 2008-06-05T11:38:07-04:00 what about FF5 spelled out multiple times in a very light half-tone behind the thermometer... either same consistency, or bold-to-light, like having it slowly diminish to nothing? Hope that makes since... I sometimes have trouble putting my thoughts in to words :P 4885 Tee 2008-06-05T11:40:51-04:00 99016 1025 2008-06-05T11:42:05-04:00 <blockquote><cite>justgeoff said:</cite> I'm not digging the concept at all. Sorry man.</blockquote> really? explain yourself man! its so hott the thermometer exploded... i thought concept wise it was solid. 4885 Tee 2008-06-05T11:52:30-04:00 99025 954 2008-06-05T11:52:30-04:00 maybe at the bottom like a borometer and the needled right over to max and put FF5 in that maybe maybe not i like the shirt though 4885 Tee 2008-06-05T11:54:55-04:00 99028 1486 2008-06-05T11:54:55-04:00 i think im going to make a repeating pattern.... i think... we'll see. 4885 Tee 2008-06-05T11:56:14-04:00 99032 954 2008-06-05T11:56:14-04:00 Just a note: the wearer of this tee is going to have an arrow pointing straight down to their man and/or woman bits. I know to look for this because one time I made a tee with a rockett firing off a woman's boob. P.S. I don't really get why the sticker is there. 4885 Tee 2008-06-05T11:58:36-04:00 99038 245 2008-06-05T11:59:03-04:00 yeah thats the main part i needed opinions on... placement of the band name. 4885 Tee 2008-06-05T11:59:30-04:00 99039 954 2008-06-05T11:59:30-04:00 i think there should be more glass shards, bigger, like they are flying towards the viewer. Its a nice concept but its kind of lacking compositionally maybe big text, have the thermometer slightly angled across teh chest, coming out of the text, text could be wearing an ice pack on top of it like its sick. 4885 Tee 2008-06-05T12:04:12-04:00 99048 1146 2008-06-05T12:04:12-04:00 At quick glance i thought it was a maple leaf. It didn't hit me as an exploding thermometer as well. It just seemed like text on top of a thermometer. Plus it feels a little top heavy. Dunno maybe add some glass elements like an explosion? --Just realized you had those already. Maybe add a lot more? 4885 Tee 2008-06-05T12:13:43-04:00 99061 1259 2008-06-05T12:13:43-04:00 I think this would be kind of cool... http://www.flickr.com/photos/chimichagua/491638336/ To replace "saturday night fever" with "Family Force 5 Fever" in that style, but instead of making the text go completely horizontal, break the words up and stack them. Kinda like... Family Force 5 Fever Then have the line from the top of the "S" (from the word Saturday) connect and run through the other words for the final touch. Then bling it out and stylize it. So yeah, an all type shirt. 4885 Tee 2008-06-05T12:20:21-04:00 99067 598 2008-06-05T12:22:13-04:00 <blockquote><cite>chrisrushing said:</cite> <blockquote><cite>justgeoff said:</cite> I'm not digging the concept at all. Sorry man.</blockquote> really? explain yourself man! its so hott the thermometer exploded... i thought concept wise it was solid.</blockquote> I just think the concept is kinda boring, especially for a tee. 4885 Tee 2008-06-05T12:33:12-04:00 99074 1661 2008-06-05T12:33:12-04:00 how about a hot nurse on the back with ff5 there ... 4885 Tee 2008-07-02T11:20:16-04:00 125607 1525 2008-07-02T11:20:16-04:00 the hot nurse sounds good.. holding the thermometer gasping with surprise. the broken glass shards need to pop more as well. 4885 Tee 2008-08-02T03:25:49-04:00 151847 6004 2008-08-02T03:25:49-04:00 you could make the bottom more of an "orb" shape and ditch the sticker which would make it look a little better and the letters look kind of ehh..its like there is a ton of force pushing them up and then there are one or two spray drip things 4885 Tee 2008-09-09T19:08:27-04:00 190956 785 2008-09-09T19:08:27-04:00