Family Force 5 - Fever tee
posted 2 months ago by chrisrushing
Design in progress.
I appreciate comments.
Not crazy about the sticker part... i need critique... specifically in how the band name should go...
i thad a thought of drawing a splatter on the back shoulder.
17 Comments
edword said 2 months ago
Great idea!! luv the lettering.
yeah not sure about the sticker.
what about bigger and behind thermometer or a patteren maybe? there's alot of room there to play with.
Incarnadine said 2 months ago
Great concept! yeah, the sticker could maybe be replaced by some larger, more subtle (Like in the light blue you used on the sticker) type in the background to fill up the sides of the thermometer? I dunno.
mitchbones said 2 months ago
Bad Idea Alert:
I say you have a fucking sun or something generating heat (Toaster, microwave,Sun, Fireball, Megan Fox) with FF5 written on it.
justgeoff said 2 months ago
I'm not digging the concept at all. Sorry man.
DCAY said 2 months ago
what about FF5 spelled out multiple times in a very light half-tone behind the thermometer... either same consistency, or bold-to-light, like having it slowly diminish to nothing?
Hope that makes since... I sometimes have trouble putting my thoughts in to words :P
chrisrushing said 2 months ago
really? explain yourself man!
its so hott the thermometer exploded... i thought concept wise it was solid.
heroes said 2 months ago
maybe at the bottom like a borometer and the needled right over to max and put FF5 in that
maybe maybe not i like the shirt though
chrisrushing said 2 months ago
i think im going to make a repeating pattern.... i think... we'll see.
Nate said 2 months ago
Just a note: the wearer of this tee is going to have an arrow pointing straight down to their man and/or woman bits.
I know to look for this because one time I made a tee with a rockett firing off a woman's boob.
P.S. I don't really get why the sticker is there.
chrisrushing said 2 months ago
yeah thats the main part i needed opinions on... placement of the band name.
derekdeal said 2 months ago
i think there should be more glass shards, bigger, like they are flying towards the viewer. Its a nice concept but its kind of lacking compositionally
maybe big text, have the thermometer slightly angled across teh chest, coming out of the text, text could be wearing an ice pack on top of it like its sick.
jimmyheartcore said 2 months ago
This is my least favorite design of yours.
collisiontheory said 2 months ago
At quick glance i thought it was a maple leaf. It didn't hit me as an exploding thermometer as well. It just seemed like text on top of a thermometer. Plus it feels a little top heavy.
Dunno maybe add some glass elements like an explosion? --Just realized you had those already. Maybe add a lot more?
sockmonkee said 2 months ago
I think this would be kind of cool...
http://www.flickr.com/photos/chimichagua/491638336/
To replace "saturday night fever" with "Family Force 5 Fever" in that style, but instead of making the text go completely horizontal, break the words up and stack them. Kinda like...
Family
Force
5 Fever
Then have the line from the top of the "S" (from the word Saturday) connect and run through the other words for the final touch. Then bling it out and stylize it. So yeah, an all type shirt.
justgeoff said 2 months ago
I just think the concept is kinda boring, especially for a tee.
Universitee Apparel said about 1 month ago
how about a hot nurse on the back with ff5 there ...
Omni said 27 days ago
the hot nurse sounds good.. holding the thermometer gasping with surprise. the broken glass shards need to pop more as well.