thats so clean and perfect yo. if i were to try to do anything to it... which would be just variations on a A+ design, i might try using a lighter tone for the cursive text. just because the imagery is so tight, i would want it as the focal point.
I think the band text would go good if it was at the top right of the skull. It would give it a little more emphasis to. You usually dont see bands names in the middle or bottom of the shirt. Then you could either move down the lyrics or abandon them completely.
Just a thought since you asked for critiques but I really like this one.
Jon Kruse said: I like it.
I think the band text would go good if it was at the top right of the skull. It would give it a little more emphasis to. You usually dont see bands names in the middle or bottom of the shirt. Then you could either move down the lyrics or abandon them completely.
Just a thought since you asked for critiques but I really like this one.
I dont know, i like the placement of the band name, and if you got rid of the lyrics then it would look abit out of place...
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dcastle8183 said 4 months ago
I really like this. Great composition!
jimiyo said 4 months ago
thats so clean and perfect yo. if i were to try to do anything to it... which would be just variations on a A+ design, i might try using a lighter tone for the cursive text. just because the imagery is so tight, i would want it as the focal point.
dougie said 4 months ago
I really like it, put it up as a finished design so we can love it!
swissarmyshark said 4 months ago
well done, but you should throw around some other color swatches
chrisrushing said 4 months ago
nice he hit you up. cool deal.
benwatson said 4 months ago
Incredible. Good placement, Great colors, I would totally rock it.
ThinkBaker said 4 months ago
This is sexy.
Tender Branson said 4 months ago
Nice. I think Jimi has a good point on the text. A lighter shade would really finish it off.
Jon Kruse said 4 months ago
I like it.
I think the band text would go good if it was at the top right of the skull. It would give it a little more emphasis to. You usually dont see bands names in the middle or bottom of the shirt. Then you could either move down the lyrics or abandon them completely.
Just a thought since you asked for critiques but I really like this one.
Rik said 4 months ago
Id buy it for two reasons; (suprisingly neither to do with the band.)
1) The design is amazing, i dont think you could improve it, personally.
2) I love frank miller comics.
dougie said 4 months ago
I dont know, i like the placement of the band name, and if you got rid of the lyrics then it would look abit out of place...
warrenk said 4 months ago
Nothing but love from me. I love the script text on the right side, your left if you were wearing the shirt.
Tang said 4 months ago
Too good
thefleecing said 4 months ago
looks like a shirt you would see from NOTW, but way better.
ez-kun said 4 months ago
excellent, love your stuff.
ma mir ca te-am gasit asa greu pe emptees...adica sa imi dau seama ca esti compatriot:)
barkone said 4 months ago
Multam....La fel si Hyperhyphen tot de-a noastra daca nu stiai: http://www.emptees.com/people/3912-hyperhyphen
ez-kun said 4 months ago
nu, nu stiam... fain asa, nu ma mai simt singur pe aici:P
ah..si fatmouse e de-al nostru:) http://emptees.com/people/4552-fat-mouse