it needs the smoke on the shirt, because without it it just looks like someone is holding a bullet.
but im not really a fan of this because its pushing a message i dont back, smoking is legal, why would you tell someone not to do it? they know the risks, be done with it.
andrE w. said: it needs the smoke on the shirt, because without it it just looks like someone is holding a bullet.
but im not really a fan of this because its pushing a message i dont back, smoking is legal, why would you tell someone not to do it? they know the risks, be done with it.
if you dont't agree with the message its conveying dont buy it... thats my stance, i know its a polarizing topic thats why i chose it. its an important topic in my life, as it has effected my family directly, thus i chose to target it.
i do agree that it may need the smoke, i kicked that idea around for a while, the orignal had it but i went for simplicity...im sure yet though
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threads north said 6 months ago
I think it looks better with the smoke and no slogan. Its simple but effective, I like it.
andrE w. said 6 months ago
it needs the smoke on the shirt, because without it it just looks like someone is holding a bullet.
but im not really a fan of this because its pushing a message i dont back, smoking is legal, why would you tell someone not to do it? they know the risks, be done with it.
Public Ally said 6 months ago
if you dont't agree with the message its conveying dont buy it... thats my stance, i know its a polarizing topic thats why i chose it. its an important topic in my life, as it has effected my family directly, thus i chose to target it.
i do agree that it may need the smoke, i kicked that idea around for a while, the orignal had it but i went for simplicity...im sure yet though
ThinkBaker said 6 months ago
T first glanec, I thought this was a fish skeleton.
quakerninja said 6 months ago
most clever use of the swirl tool award.
Public Ally said 6 months ago
hah thank you.
jaynajaynajayna said 6 months ago
I like the way it looks now better Andrewwww
Public Ally said 6 months ago
why thank you
mattxtucksxgirl said 5 months ago
I think the message gets across as it is, but would be better with the slogan.