
A shirt for my band I Am Ocean, Just the simple logo Designed by me on an American Apparel Forest Green shirt. Any ideas to make this better?

A shirt for my band I Am Ocean, Just the simple logo Designed by me on an American Apparel Forest Green shirt. Any ideas to make this better?
7 Comments
What The Eff said 9 months ago
some of the letters are really hard to make out.
the "m" being the worst.
Also some of the letters look like different sizes.
DOG ROCK said 9 months ago
the 'm' looks like 'n'
ryanbeam said 9 months ago
Thanks guys ill need to size down the the "Am" To fit better. Opinions are great!
What The Eff said 9 months ago
exactly what i said.....
sockmonkee said 9 months ago
you should really check out some type books. nothing is consistent with your type.
ryanbeam said 9 months ago
sockmonkee ill have to do that, thank you, love your work by the way.
Sam Kaufman said 8 months ago
Little too live traced.