Tee shirt designer DanFromBlackLine - Dan Dellecese

What's This? | UPDATED

posted 9 months ago by DanFromBlackLine

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What's This? | UPDATED tee shirt design by DanFromBlackLine - Dan Dellecese

Tee design for Black Line Clothing.

I tried a few color combinations, but seemed like black was working best.

I was going for the “chalk” look with the type.

Any thoughts are appreciated.

Updated:
Changed the woman in the jar, let me know what you think.

Updated:
Moved the woman over more. New, chalk-ier type. Thoughts?

13 Comments

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  1. Tee shirt designer dobi - Rob Dobi

    dobi said 9 months ago

    “It’s supposed to be a woman in the jar, by the way.”

    kinda hard to read that small, and if you have to explain it the concept usually gets lost.

  2. Tee shirt designer DanFromBlackLine - Dan Dellecese

    DanFromBlackLine said 9 months ago

    I was thinking about making the jar larger. I’ll work on it. Thanks.

  3. Tee shirt designer Trebor - Robert Karpati

    Trebor said 9 months ago

    a frog could be better in the glass!
    the boy and the women is to lot, its not logical…
    but i love the graphic very much!

  4. Tee shirt designer DanFromBlackLine - Dan Dellecese

    DanFromBlackLine said 9 months ago

    Thanks, man!

    I really liked the idea of a boy coming across a tiny woman in a glass jar… not really sure, but I might try and work in a bigger jar and maybe a different woman.

  5. Tee shirt designer Ouchless - Andy

    Ouchless said 9 months ago

    it’s not so much the jar that needs to be bigger, maybe slightly, but the women needs it the most. i can’t tell what is in there at all. maybe like you said try a different women. but i love it other than that. great concept.

  6. Tee shirt designer Randomentity - Courtney Varner

    Randomentity said 9 months ago

    i would have the woman pushing up against the glass, looking up at him.

  7. Tee shirt designer DanFromBlackLine - Dan Dellecese

    DanFromBlackLine said 9 months ago

    Just added the new version. She’s looking up and pressing on the glass.

  8. Tee shirt designer wes_allen - wes allen

    wes_allen said 9 months ago

    i would hand draw the type with actual chalk. it doesnt really seem to match to the design. but everything else looks great!

  9. Tee shirt designer Ouchless - Andy

    Ouchless said 9 months ago

    oh man hand draw it with chalk, like wes said, that’d look nice.
    the font seems too spray paintish, maybe. keep us updated on this one.

  10. Tee shirt designer LitoQ - Daniel Quintana

    LitoQ said 9 months ago

    I think you should move the woman to the right a bit so her hand rests on the right side of the jar just before the line… itll look more real… just like the tiny woman i found in a jar this afternoon

  11. Tee shirt designer DanFromBlackLine - Dan Dellecese

    DanFromBlackLine said 9 months ago

    Hahaha. I’ll move her over and see what I can do with the type. Thanks for the positive feedback, guys. I’ll hopefully have a new one up for you soon.

  12. Tee shirt designer collisiontheory - aj dimarucot

    collisiontheory said 9 months ago

    Ouchless said: oh man hand draw it with chalk, like wes said, that’d look nice. the font seems too spray paintish, maybe. keep us updated on this one.

    i agree, or you could write directly on illustrator with a nice ‘chalky’ brush.

  13. Tee shirt designer DanFromBlackLine - Dan Dellecese

    DanFromBlackLine said 8 months ago

    Updated version is up.

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