Type should be a LITTLE cleaner…to be consistent with the rest of the vector-looking elements, you know? Everything else is a little more rounded and cleaner looking.
it doesn’t look like your typical dobi shirt, I didn’t realize it was his design either. It looks like this was phoned in by Dobi, in my opinion. What were you thinking Rob? hehe
No, I totally agree with Alex. No matter who it is, they can still be critiqued. That’s how people get better at what they do; they get critiqued. It’s just up to the person if they want to use the advice or not. That’s what this site is all about :)
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alexgoldstein said 11 months ago
Type should be a LITTLE cleaner…to be consistent with the rest of the vector-looking elements, you know? Everything else is a little more rounded and cleaner looking.
Chris Martin said 11 months ago
alex, who the hell are you tellin dobi what to do????? such a n00b… lalwz!
alexgoldstein said 11 months ago
Oh crap…I didn’t even realize that this was him! Haha. Whoops…
jfinley said 11 months ago
it doesn’t look like your typical dobi shirt, I didn’t realize it was his design either. It looks like this was phoned in by Dobi, in my opinion. What were you thinking Rob? hehe
ryanmiller said 10 months ago
No, I totally agree with Alex. No matter who it is, they can still be critiqued. That’s how people get better at what they do; they get critiqued. It’s just up to the person if they want to use the advice or not. That’s what this site is all about :)
dobi said 10 months ago
lay it on me dudes! i can take it!
actually i faxed this one in jeff!
jimmyheartcore said 9 months ago
I tend to agree about the text. I would like to see something a little cleaner.
It doesn’t look bad its just kind of weird seeing you choose a font like that.
LitoQ said 8 months ago
i agree on with the general consensus on the type… it looks good, just doesnt exactly fit… overall a great concept tho
theknifefits said 7 months ago
ive seen that ring stain on an as i lay dying shirt