Help On A Design

ok so got this design I am doing. Wondering what it needs, I have tried it with a variety of different things but cant decide. what do you think?

NUMBER 1:

NUMBER 2:

NUMBER 3:

NUMBER 4:

or has anyone else got any ideas what I could put in to give it that extra something...

1. 

   heavyprints said about 1 month ago

   I like number 4. Looks a bit like flour or confectioners sugar.

2. 

   MykeCatastrophic said about 1 month ago

   1 and 4 are the best, IMO.

   heavyprints said: I like number 4. Looks a bit like flour or confectioners sugar.

   That’s the first thing that came to my mind, too.

3. 

   image620 said about 1 month ago

   I like 2

4. 

   make planes not waste said about 1 month ago

   MykeCatastrophic said: 1 and 4 are the best, IMO.

   heavyprints said: I like number 4. Looks a bit like flour or confectioners sugar.

   That’s the first thing that came to my mind, too.

   yea thats what its meant to look like.....

5. 

   MykeCatastrophic said about 1 month ago

   I figured. Either way, it looks awesome.

6. 

   make planes not waste said about 1 month ago

   image620 said: I like 2

   do you not think the dripping paint thing has been overdone though?

7. 

   awakendesigncompany said about 1 month ago

   i agree with heavy.

   it looks completely rad dude!

8. 

   make planes not waste said about 1 month ago

   MykeCatastrophic said: I figured. Either way, it looks awesome.

   thanks man - just drew it up tonight on my wacom and been playing around with it.....think I am going to stick with the 'bakery' kinda look with the milk glass stain and flour....

9. 

   make planes not waste said about 1 month ago

   awakendesigncompany said: i agree with heavy. it looks completely rad dude!

   cheers - i am still in two minds whether to put text with it or not....

10. 

    awakendesigncompany said about 1 month ago

    make planes not waste said:

    awakendesigncompany said: i agree with heavy. it looks completely rad dude!

    cheers - i am still in two minds whether to put text with it or not....

    hm, what would the text say dude?

11. 

    MykeCatastrophic said about 1 month ago

    make planes not waste said:

    MykeCatastrophic said: I figured. Either way, it looks awesome.

    thanks man - just drew it up tonight on my wacom and been playing around with it.....think I am going to stick with the 'bakery' kinda look with the milk glass stain and flour....

    Yeah, I love the stain you put into it.
    I like 1 because of it’s simplicity, but I think number 4 would probably catch more attention with the flour and stand out more in people’s minds.

12. 

    darianhrtwl said about 1 month ago

    i really like number 2.
    it makes the most sense and kind of explains the stains on the side which are genius by the way.

13. 

    ghostforhire said about 1 month ago

    V1 for me.

    Good work, dude.

14. 

    make planes not waste said about 1 month ago

    Darian-Hartwell said: i really like number 2. it makes the most sense and kind of explains the stains on the side which are genius by the way.

    but similarly would 4 not work also as it could be marks in the flour from the milk used to make it?

15. 

    make planes not waste said about 1 month ago

    awakendesigncompany said: hm, what would the text say dude?

    im not sure, I could use the company name I am deisgning for, or some kind of slogan or phrase.....etc...

16. 

    iamjbodz said about 1 month ago

    number 4 ftw

17. 

    Johnny D said about 1 month ago

    Umm I got an idea... do the reverse... rather than a missing arm and some crumbs... have an arm, and a missing cookie with crumbs. and an outline of sugar... that being said, it would lack content.

    I like v4

18. 

    Birdie3431 said about 1 month ago

    yea i like 1 and 4

19. 

    downrodeo said about 1 month ago

    4 is good, dood. :)

20. 

    junkiethreads said about 1 month ago

    I vote 4!

21. 

    shantyshawn said about 1 month ago

    Does that bear have nipples? #4 all the way.

22. 

    quakerninja said about 1 month ago

    looks good right off the bat. I like the texture on the edge part. Nice. Good job keeping the colors down too.

23. 

    mbennett said about 1 month ago

    number 2 brotha

24. 

    heythequickness said about 1 month ago

    I actually like number 1 the best.

25. 

    Hays said about 1 month ago

    4 dude.

26. 

    make planes not waste said about 1 month ago

    shantyshawn said: Does that bear have nipples? #4 all the way.

    haha - yes, yes it does lol

27. 

    make planes not waste said about 1 month ago

    so I am thinkin I am going to stick with number 4 then...Thanks everyone

28. 

    Random said about 1 month ago

    4 I like the flour effect

29. 

    BuchananDesigns said about 1 month ago

    4!

30. 

    gaunty said about 1 month ago

    4 with an added shadow so the bear look like its on something and not flyin!

31. 

    integralApparel said about 1 month ago

    What about a chalk or flour outline of the cookie that was eaten?

32. 

    integralApparel said about 1 month ago

    like a murder scene, with caution tape, and lil famous cookies as detectives, but they have lost something too, like chocolate bunny missing a tail or a foil santa ripped open or something..

33. 

    make planes not waste said about 1 month ago

    gaunty said: 4 with an added shadow so the bear look like its on something and not flyin!

    yea i was thinkin that - but how would i do it when i am limited to 3 colours?

34. 

    Joey said about 1 month ago

    1

35. 

    dustinnance said about 1 month ago

    4 for sure

36. 

    make planes not waste said about 1 month ago

    gaunty said: 4 with an added shadow so the bear look like its on something and not flyin!

    how would I add shadow when I am limited to 3 colours? If I use the same colour as the outline it will just look like a thicker outline

37. 

    integralApparel said about 1 month ago

    maybe its the perspective of the shadow? cuz the circly one in the background look like its not flat compared to the one underneath the bear now.

38. 

    Betraydan said about 1 month ago

    number 4

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