So Ive crafted a tee and Im looking for yall to emptee out some critically crital critique on it. Im looking for a vote on the color scheme, comments on the art, and how you guys feel about the coloring techniques. I want to combine all of these feels into one AWESOME shirt to submit to threadless or something similar too that.
1.
2.
3.
4.
5. 
Thanks in advance!
16 Comments
AetoricDesign said over 1 year ago
Sorry, I didnt notice a Photobucket uploading error. The problem will be fixed shortly.
4Sevens said over 1 year ago
Without seeing number 1, Im gonna go with the whole of number 2 with the purple in the dagger of three. (Srry, I know you werent asking for votes, but...)
Gnomad said over 1 year ago
2 or 3. The rest are trash.
AetoricDesign said over 1 year ago
Anything helps, really. I guess I should have also said just saying whether or not you like is good, too.
andrE w. said over 1 year ago
only two are loading on my browser, but i like the design. cant really comment on colorways obviously
AetoricDesign said over 1 year ago
if anyone has any hate theyd like to throw my way, Ill take all comers (giggle)
Shralp said over 1 year ago
Instead of duplicating each dagger, make them different from one another. Same goes with the backround (flowers). Make each one unique.
jimmyhaffa1 said over 1 year ago
youve exceeded the limits of the "hand drawn look" and is there any meaning to this design at all??? personally my favorite tshirts are ones that not only look amazing, have great colours, but also have a deep/clever/funny meaning to them....im not sure how many of those things this tshirt accomplishes
hope that helps
ChrisW said over 1 year ago
3 but i think you should have drawn 3 different daggers or soemthing.
Bob Kawa said over 1 year ago
2
cbass99 said over 1 year ago
AetoricDesign said over 1 year ago
Im sorry, but Im not quite sure what you mean by "exceeded the limits of the hand drawn look." The illustration is too shitty?
jimmyhaffa1 said over 1 year ago
no i mean its a little too rough, theres a fine line bewteen getting that cool hand drawn look and the way too rough sketch look and yous seems to be leaning more on that side, know what i mean vern?
jimmyhaffa1 said over 1 year ago
and i mainly mean the knives
AetoricDesign said over 1 year ago
I guess I understand that. Illustration is a very sensitive subject in the fact that everyone has preferences.
And yea, this is kind of a bump.
AetoricDesign said over 1 year ago
So are the other ones not trash?
(BUMP)