Critically Critical Critiquing

So I’ve crafted a tee and I’m looking for ya’ll to emptee out some critically crital critique on it. I’m looking for a vote on the color scheme, comments on the art, and how you guys feel about the coloring techniques. I want to combine all of these feels into one AWESOME shirt to submit to threadless or something similar too that.

1.
2.
3.
4.
5.

Thanks in advance!

1. 

   AetoricDesign said over 1 year ago

   Sorry, I didn’t notice a Photobucket uploading error. The problem will be fixed shortly.

2. 

   4Sevens said over 1 year ago

   Without seeing number 1, I’m gonna go with the whole of number 2 with the purple in the dagger of three. (Srry, I know you weren’t asking for votes, but...)

3. 

   Gnomad said over 1 year ago

   2 or 3. The rest are trash.

4. 

   AetoricDesign said over 1 year ago

   4Sevens said: Without seeing number 1, I’m gonna go with the whole of number 2 with the purple in the dagger of three. (Srry, I know you weren’t asking for votes, but...)

   Anything helps, really. I guess I should have also said just saying whether or not you like is good, too.

5. 

   andrE w. said over 1 year ago

   only two are loading on my browser, but i like the design. cant really comment on colorways obviously

6. 

   AetoricDesign said over 1 year ago

   if anyone has any hate they’d like to throw my way, I’ll take all comers (giggle)

7. 

   Shralp said over 1 year ago

   Instead of duplicating each dagger, make them different from one another. Same goes with the backround (flowers). Make each one unique.

8. 

   jimmyhaffa1 said over 1 year ago

   youve exceeded the limits of the "hand drawn look" and is there any meaning to this design at all??? personally my favorite tshirts are ones that not only look amazing, have great colours, but also have a deep/clever/funny meaning to them....im not sure how many of those things this tshirt accomplishes

   hope that helps

9. 

   ChrisW said over 1 year ago

   3 but i think you should have drawn 3 different daggers or soemthing.

10. 

    Bob Kawa said over 1 year ago

    2

11. 

    cbass99 said over 1 year ago

    thrash nasty said: 2

12. 

    AetoricDesign said over 1 year ago

    jimmyhaffa1 said: youve exceeded the limits of the "hand drawn look" and is there any meaning to this design at all??? personally my favorite tshirts are ones that not only look amazing, have great colours, but also have a deep/clever/funny meaning to them....im not sure how many of those things this tshirt accomplishes hope that helps

    I’m sorry, but I’m not quite sure what you mean by "exceeded the limits of the hand drawn look." The illustration is too shitty?

13. 

    jimmyhaffa1 said over 1 year ago

    no i mean its a little too rough, theres a fine line bewteen getting that cool hand drawn look and the way too rough sketch look and yous seems to be leaning more on that side, know what i mean vern?

14. 

    jimmyhaffa1 said over 1 year ago

    and i mainly mean the knives

15. 

    AetoricDesign said over 1 year ago

    jimmyhaffa1 said: and i mainly mean the knives

    I guess I understand that. Illustration is a very sensitive subject in the fact that everyone has preferences.

    And yea, this is kind of a bump.

16. 

    AetoricDesign said over 1 year ago

    Gnomad said: 2 or 3. The rest are trash.

    So are the other ones not trash?

    (BUMP)

17. Log In
    back