So I've crafted a tee and I'm looking for ya'll to emptee out some critically crital critique on it. I'm looking for a vote on the color scheme, comments on the art, and how you guys feel about the coloring techniques. I want to combine all of these feels into one AWESOME shirt to submit to threadless or something similar too that. 1. <img src="http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j56/handsomejake/Misc/DBHdesignColorPreview1.jpg"/> 2. <img src="http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j56/handsomejake/Misc/DBHdesignColorPreview2.jpg"/> 3. <img src="http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j56/handsomejake/Misc/DBHdesignColorPreview3.jpg"/> 4. <img src="http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j56/handsomejake/Misc/DBHdesignColorPreview4.jpg"/> 5. <img src="http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j56/handsomejake/Misc/DBHdesignColorPreview5.jpg"/> Thanks in advance! 2009-04-25T16:41:16-04:00 16 2009-04-22T21:27:21-04:00 true 0 20111 false false 12325 12325 2 2010-02-09T12:03:11-05:00 333 Sorry, I didn't notice a Photobucket uploading error. The problem will be fixed shortly. 20111 Post 2009-04-22T21:29:03-04:00 526831 12325 2009-04-22T21:29:03-04:00 Without seeing number 1, I'm gonna go with the whole of number 2 with the purple in the dagger of three. (Srry, I know you weren't asking for votes, but...) 20111 Post 2009-04-22T21:32:32-04:00 526901 6468 2009-04-22T21:32:32-04:00 2 or 3. The rest are trash. 20111 Post 2009-04-22T21:36:27-04:00 526951 9789 2009-04-22T21:36:27-04:00 <blockquote><cite>4Sevens said:</cite> Without seeing number 1, I'm gonna go with the whole of number 2 with the purple in the dagger of three. (Srry, I know you weren't asking for votes, but...)</blockquote> Anything helps, really. I guess I should have also said just saying whether or not you like is good, too. 20111 Post 2009-04-22T21:36:57-04:00 526991 12325 2009-04-22T21:36:57-04:00 only two are loading on my browser, but i like the design. cant really comment on colorways obviously 20111 Post 2009-04-22T21:39:43-04:00 527011 1208 2009-04-22T21:39:43-04:00 if anyone has any hate they'd like to throw my way, I'll take all comers (giggle) 20111 Post 2009-04-22T23:25:16-04:00 528141 12325 2009-04-22T23:25:16-04:00 Instead of duplicating each dagger, make them different from one another. Same goes with the backround (flowers). Make each one unique. 20111 Post 2009-04-22T23:32:16-04:00 528201 9775 2009-04-22T23:32:16-04:00 youve exceeded the limits of the "hand drawn look" and is there any meaning to this design at all??? personally my favorite tshirts are ones that not only look amazing, have great colours, but also have a deep/clever/funny meaning to them....im not sure how many of those things this tshirt accomplishes hope that helps 20111 Post 2009-04-22T23:46:42-04:00 528321 195 2009-04-22T23:46:42-04:00 3 but i think you should have drawn 3 different daggers or soemthing. 20111 Post 2009-04-22T23:49:28-04:00 528361 9543 2009-04-22T23:49:28-04:00 2 20111 Post 2009-04-22T23:58:51-04:00 528441 12198 2009-04-22T23:58:51-04:00 <blockquote><cite>thrash nasty said:</cite> 2</blockquote> 20111 Post 2009-04-23T00:15:11-04:00 528591 3775 2009-04-23T00:15:11-04:00 <blockquote><cite>jimmyhaffa1 said:</cite> youve exceeded the limits of the "hand drawn look" and is there any meaning to this design at all??? personally my favorite tshirts are ones that not only look amazing, have great colours, but also have a deep/clever/funny meaning to them....im not sure how many of those things this tshirt accomplishes hope that helps</blockquote> I'm sorry, but I'm not quite sure what you mean by "exceeded the limits of the hand drawn look." The illustration is too shitty? 20111 Post 2009-04-23T13:27:55-04:00 534661 12325 2009-04-23T13:27:55-04:00 no i mean its a little too rough, theres a fine line bewteen getting that cool hand drawn look and the way too rough sketch look and yous seems to be leaning more on that side, know what i mean vern? 20111 Post 2009-04-23T16:37:42-04:00 536611 195 2009-04-23T16:37:42-04:00 and i mainly mean the knives 20111 Post 2009-04-23T16:38:07-04:00 536621 195 2009-04-23T16:38:07-04:00 <blockquote><cite>jimmyhaffa1 said:</cite> and i mainly mean the knives</blockquote> I guess I understand that. Illustration is a very sensitive subject in the fact that everyone has preferences. And yea, this is kind of a bump. 20111 Post 2009-04-24T21:08:04-04:00 550081 12325 2009-04-24T21:08:04-04:00 <blockquote><cite>Gnomad said:</cite> 2 or 3. The rest are trash.</blockquote> So are the other ones not trash? (BUMP) 20111 Post 2009-04-25T16:41:16-04:00 556851 12325 2009-04-25T16:41:16-04:00